seneca data computers
4 lines grammar/wording help please?
I’m a computer tech/programmer and this is gonna be in my resume so please help me.
Interests and hobbies:
Writing Java application and reverse engineering codes, strictly for experiment
Researching and testing any new preventive maintenance technology to improve skills/experiences in reducing machine downtime
Helping many friends* at Seneca College to solve computer problems (OS/printing issues/configuring laptop software) and recover any lost data
Playing soccer, and I like to hang-out with friends and to making new friends
* could you come up with a better sentence/expression that would tell I enjoy helping others/friends in solving computer problems
thanks everyone!
I think the sentence you are worried about is perfect as it is!
However, the last sentence, about playing soccer, needs one little tweak:
“…and I like hanging out with friends and making new friends” is how I suggest you word that.
